You have not completed all of the sections. Make sure you do that.
Igneous Rocks-
You have no information at all on igneous rocks make sure you add it ASAP.
Sedimentary Rocks-
Grammar:
Overall your grammar was pretty good although on your cementaion page you don't have to repeat the word rocks twice in the 1st sentence. Also your compaction page had a few grammar mistakes.
Information:
Try to find some more information for your sections because currently you don't have enough.
Capitals:
I couldn't find any capital errors.
Punctuation:
I wasn't able to find any punctuation mistakes so good job on that.
Spelling:
I could only find one spelling mistake which was the word animal on your fossil page.
Media:
You haven't included any videos but your pictures are pretty good especially your fossil one.
Metamorphic Rocks-
You haven't included any information on metamorphic rocks either. Again get down on that ASAP.
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Oreo
1/4/2012 08:11:00 am
I have put igneous rock inside 'rocks and minerals' and sedemantary.
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Cleopatra
1/4/2012 10:38:32 am
Sedimentary:
Grammar- good job, very few mistakes (most of which were on your compaction page)
Information- whats on your pages is good but theres not much information, try and work on that.
Spelling- the only spelling mistake I could find was "animal" on your fossils page, great job!
Capitals- I found no capital errors, nice!
Punctuation- there wasnt one punctuation mistake I could find, good job!
Media- good relivant pictures, nice job!
Metamorphic and Igneous:
there was no information, make sure you get those pages done, they were due a while ago.
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Oreo
1/4/2012 12:32:48 pm
I put them inside 'rocks and minerals'
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Gary
1/23/2013 09:44:53 am
Maybe you could add a picture?
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