Tell me if I have to fix any thing or misssing, ect I appreceat all of your help Thank you :)
 


Joe Joltz
01/04/2012 16:06

You have not completed all of the sections. Make sure you do that.


Igneous Rocks-

You have no information at all on igneous rocks make sure you add it ASAP.

Sedimentary Rocks-

Grammar:
Overall your grammar was pretty good although on your cementaion page you don't have to repeat the word rocks twice in the 1st sentence. Also your compaction page had a few grammar mistakes.

Information:
Try to find some more information for your sections because currently you don't have enough.

Capitals:
I couldn't find any capital errors.

Punctuation:
I wasn't able to find any punctuation mistakes so good job on that.

Spelling:
I could only find one spelling mistake which was the word animal on your fossil page.

Media:
You haven't included any videos but your pictures are pretty good especially your fossil one.


Metamorphic Rocks-

You haven't included any information on metamorphic rocks either. Again get down on that ASAP.

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Oreo
01/04/2012 16:11

I have put igneous rock inside 'rocks and minerals' and sedemantary.

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Cleopatra
01/04/2012 18:38

Sedimentary:

Grammar- good job, very few mistakes (most of which were on your compaction page)

Information- whats on your pages is good but theres not much information, try and work on that.

Spelling- the only spelling mistake I could find was "animal" on your fossils page, great job!

Capitals- I found no capital errors, nice!

Punctuation- there wasnt one punctuation mistake I could find, good job!

Media- good relivant pictures, nice job!

Metamorphic and Igneous:
there was no information, make sure you get those pages done, they were due a while ago.

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Oreo
01/04/2012 20:32

I put them inside 'rocks and minerals'

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Gary
01/23/2013 17:44

Maybe you could add a picture?

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