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Mary poppins
12/13/2011 18:57

UM jhonny your website looks great its really good but two things i think you should work on is your sentece structre and finding the right information but over all your website looks great good job

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Goddess Athena
12/13/2011 19:58

Divergent boundary-
- You could have added more information like what happens when divergent boundaries occur on land.
- You dont have any spelling or grammar errors which is great.
- Over all you did an awesome job!

Transform boundary-
- You could have added more information like which place formed because of a transform boundary.
- You dont have any spelling mistakes or grammar errors which is great.
- Over all you did an awesome job!

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Goda
12/13/2011 20:33

You need way more info for everthing. I think you didn't put in your on word for plate tectonics. And little grammar mistake for transform boundary and divergent boundary. Great job!!

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Goda
12/13/2011 20:34

Mary you need to fix your grammar for the comment you wrote.

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Mr. Hong
12/13/2011 21:34

@ Johnny Novels - Read what 'GODDESS ATHENA' wrote. She did a good job on giving you positive feedback! Please make sure you take her suggestions and make revisions to your work. :)

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