You barely included any information for this section. Go over it and add everything we have had from the slide show. Get some pictures in and some good research.
-You have barely any info you should add some more.
-Maybe get some info from the Slide show Mr.Hong sent us.
-and maybe a picture for each characteristics.
-Otherwise good job maybe just add more info.
There is very little information in this section. Please review your class notes, the text books have good information. Try and find a reliable website to get more info. Keep working on this section. A picture for each characteristic would be good.
You just had little bit of info. You could check and see Mr.Hong sild show he gave you. Go over it.
- You could add more information for this section
- You could also add another page for your 6 characteristics.
- For information, you could check the slide show Mr Hong send us.
- You could add pictures for this section so that the viewer would know what you are talking about.
- Over all you did a great job!
@ Johnny - Please read the feedback that your classmates have given you and make the edits/revisions.
Hello im Johnny feel free to post comments in the comment box and tell me if I have to add anything or missing anything or I have to fix anything on my website. Please no bad comments. Thanks:)